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Sistine1408

Age/Gender: 17, Male
Location: Solemn Hearts, Ohio

Just stay tonight, and you'll see that things can work out. This will last forever.

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Sistine1408

One More Marionette

Posted by Sistine1408 Jul. 7, 2008 @ 8:07 PM EDT

Left without any
Reason to live
My plagues are many
And I've no first son to give

These empty sidewalks
Are cleansed by a flood
Where raindrops once mocked
Now there's only blood.

But it's blood that guides me,
Protects me and hides me
It's tales of melancholy
I cannot put behind me

The string's are finally cut,
I laugh as puppets fall
Limbs limp in the thick air,
Faces unknown to all.

Fiery rage and heroin
Reaving through my veins
Now I can see the strings again,
Constriction without pain.

And there's ony hatred, bleak and black,
In this monolithe city of gallow.
And All I feel now is theacute lack
Of a modern messiah so hallowed

All strings are cut,
I weep as puppets fall
Limbs limp in the thick air,
Souls unknown to all

These strings now severed
Can only hold false hopes and dreams
Now the scissors are in my hands
And it's my turn to cut at the seams

And now I'm falling with the rest
My body fills with regret
The city turns to nothing less
Than another jail to forget

My strings are gone; I'm finally free;
The bloody sidewalks are rushing at me
Now crimson sorrow is all I see
The bloody sidewalks are rushing at me

Forever falling wih the rest
My corpse fills with regret
As I become nothing less
Than one more falling marionette.

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8 Comments

Jul. 11, 2008 | 2:06 AM KlanMaster911 says:

Flaco, the rat with an un-deserving name.
Still the same old rat that never changed.
Flaco.
Talks shit but fails to prove his point.
Flaco.
Cant hold up to his word and backs down when hes out gunned.
Flaco.
Lowers his voice and spreads his lies.
Whispers his evil and shows it with his eyes.
Flaco.
The king of nothing.
Flaco.
Steals and gets nothing.
Flaco.
He will always be the same.
The rat with no name.
Flaco.
Always out playing a game.
Just so 'HE' can gain.
Flaco.
The king of nothing that will always be nothing.
Flaco.
Part of a pack that 'think' they are something.
Flaco.
Follower of fools and king of nothing.

Jul. 13, 2008 | 1:40 AM Sistine1408 responds:

Cool.


Jul. 14, 2008 | 3:36 PM Sk8erGirl13 says:

"That color dude--whatever the hell his name is--he's an asshole."

Sounds like somebody's riding Skybolt's cock.

Jul. 15, 2008 | 12:48 AM Sistine1408 responds:

Let's try to keep comments related to posts, shall we?


Jul. 15, 2008 | 8:43 PM Sensationalism says:

What's that from?

Jul. 17, 2008 | 9:39 PM Sistine1408 responds:

My mind.

It's a creepy place, you should visit sometime.


Jul. 31, 2008 | 10:24 PM zmanrulez says:

zmanrulez waz here!!

Aug. 31, 2008 | 3:35 AM Sistine1408 responds:

And quite the homosexual, at that.


Jan. 25, 2009 | 5:21 PM Themarkinside says:

Praise Allah!


Mar. 18, 2009 | 4:42 PM hunte3r says:

go to hell nazi bitch


Apr. 5, 2009 | 3:40 AM Shotgunbacklash says:

I can't really say it's the best thing ever, or that I haven't heard anything like this before, but I can say that it is thought provoking at the least. I'm not particularly keen on angst drenched teenage poetry, but this one at least held my interest for more than five seconds. Did I detect religious undertones? Still, good job.


May. 17, 2009 | 3:58 AM Leidolfr says:

there once was a man from nantucket..

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